Oh, for the shorter
Yes, YES! it's a short one,such a relief tojust take a quick read scan.Whooosh; eyes up, down.Not much to read I agreeor deeply profound metaphor,but remember when you were fiveyou thought small was...
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Hey Matt, I didn't think grownups were serious, I just thought that they were SOOOOoooooo OLD! May each one of you walk in peace and kindness. Always!
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You're right... both (I'm going to revise slightly)Matt Fellowship of the Pen- Unravelling
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this, of course, would be one of those extremely rate workings of yours that require one to come up with a long winded, slow spoken, word for word, detailed crits.... but being somewhat lazy I'll just...
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Not one of my best (I know) - just an idea to mess around with.Matt Fellowship of the Pen- Unravelling
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Matt. I actually do think it's good. I was teasing that because of your title, you needed a looooonnnnggggish reply Fellowship of the Pen Need some exercise?..The Challenge Center
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Oh, I see. I wasn't sure if it worked or not. Thanks for the feedback Matt Fellowship of the Pen- Unravelling
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Clever!... funny and reminiscent. It made me a bit melancholy, actually. I enjoyed this!- Andrew"She writes scripture on my pages."
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hhmmmmmmm.sounds to me like a responseto something the reader isn't privy to.But, I'll drink to that (I think...)" I've got to do something-- even if it's wrong!" ~ For Shir Visit me @ All In A Pen
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You're all old to me ! I like this one and completely agree that sometimes shorter is better ! But there sure is no substitue for those long poems that make you think think think !Fearless Jen"If I...
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I think the last stanza can be read a few ways - that's what I was aiming at.Matt Fellowship of the Pen- Unravelling
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